Kyaria Bastion

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  PLEASE give me feedback on the dream and what you think could be added to it to make it better and more accessible to players. I've put quite a bit of time and thought into this place and its design and would hate to see it just go by the wayside as so many dreams have as of late.
  
  If you want to just tell me if you like it, that's fine too, I'm not above accepting compliments.
  
  If you see a bug in the dream please report it to the uploader so it can be fixed ASAP.

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    Unregistered User: Othomoris || July 27 2012, 2:55am

    "The basic premise of Kyaria Bastion is interesting and original, with lots of curious lore. Sadly, what really put me off about it the first time I walked in was the layout of the map of the keep itself. It seems to be almost exactly like that of an older dream called Northkeep, all the way down to the pillars in the main hall and the location and purpose of nearly every room, including some that were very unique to the original dream.
    
    Beyond, uh, addressing that, which you should probably do as soon as possible, I would also recommend putting up some information about the owner. The lack of details makes it a little difficult to know who to contact if a player wants a position or has a question. Nobody likes talking to an afk uploader alt.
    
    I also suggest making a forum where people interested in role-playing can communicate off of Furcadia. Successful dreams are built on successful communities, after all.
    
    All in all, you have an interesting concept here, but if you're serious about it, it needs a lot of work. Maybe get a different dream weaver, too. "

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